3 Stars for Spin Me Round Book 1 (Spin Me Series) by Elle Carmichael #Bisexual #Erotic @

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Title: Spin Me Round Book 1 (Spin Me Series)
Author Name & Publisher: Elle Carmichael
Publication Date & Length: June 24, 2015 – 38 pages

Synopsis

This erotic/LGBT romance short story series is intended for mature audiences only, 18+.

Garnet Delaware is one of LA’s best DJs, although her fight to the top has been far from easy. Life was tough after leaving home at sixteen, but she’s shed sweat and tears to earn the respect of the music industry and is now content in the arms of her girlfriend, Lena. When Garnet is offered the opportunity of a lifetime —performing at music festivals around the country in her breakout tour— she can’t wait to take the next step. However, she’s not looking forward to leaving Lena behind, even if the separation is only temporary.

NFL bad boy Wesley Black has disgraced himself, throwing away his football career. Now he is determined to get back on track to prove he has his life under control. And despite the fact that his dreams have been flushed down the toilet, he wants to redeem himself by helping Garnet achieve hers. But his desire for Garnet grows, so when the tour that he is managing ends, Wes isn’t ready to let her slip away so easily.

Plans are not always set in stone. An unexpected turn almost ruins Garnet’s career, and the person she most despises wants to help her find her way back. Turns out, the truth has a way of unlocking secrets that can either make Garnet stronger or destroy everything she’s worked so hard to build.

Caution: This short story contains explicit sex scenes and language.

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Review

ThreeStar

I think due to the length of this story, it was hard to connect to the characters, not to mention it moves so quick it’s hard to really get into any one scene.
Gar comes off as very immature with her drinking and disregard for her lover’s mother, even if said mother doesn’t like her and I can see why. Lena, her lover, is a doormat. She lets her mother and Gar control her. Wesley… well, I’m not sure how I feel about his forcefulness and high handedness.
I felt like there was more telling than showing with how the book was written. Things needed to be slowed down and give more finesse and feeling to really draw in the reader to what the characters are feeling/doing/experiencing.
However, I think there is a lot of potential in the story so I will keep reading with the hopes that it gets better as it goes.
Renee

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Elle Carmichael lives near the beach with her better half. When Elle is not writing she loves to read, go hiking, and when time permits camp out under the stars.

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